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https://doi.org/10.5194/angeo-44-435-2026
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Spectroscopic detection of terrestrial lightning from space by JUICE-MAJIS during Earth Gravity Assist
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- Final revised paper (published on 04 Jun 2026)
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-6453', Anonymous Referee #1, 23 Feb 2026
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Review of egusphere-2025-6453
Spectroscopic detection of terrestrial lightning from space by JUICE-MAJIS during Earth Gravity Assist
by Emiliano d’Aversa et al.
The authors convincingly argue that terrestrial lightning has benn spectroscopically observed with the JUICE-MAJIS instrument during the Earth Gravity Assist flyby. The analysis is quantitative, detailed and covers multiple aspects. Discussed is both the observation of terrestrial lightning as well as an outlook on future observations at Jupiter. Not mentioned are the effects of lightning in the radio spectrum, prominently VLF whistlers. These have been observed historically and numerously, on the ground and also in space. JUICE has also the RPW (radio and plasma waves), this could enable coordinated optical and radio waves analysis and studies of lightning. However, this can be left for the future. The manuscript is already quite rich. I recommend to publish the work after only minor comments.
Minor comments:
Lines 153-156: "It has been obtained by rotating the line of sight by about 4° (2° of rotation of the internal mirror) in steps for a total time of seconds. At every step (i.e. every 200 ms), a 128-pixels spectral frame encompassing 1016 wavelengths has been acquired, with an integration time of 22 ms." This is a bit confusing for me: Does it mean, that there are gaps in time, in a 200 ms long step the integration happens for 22 ms, i.e. about 11% of the time. At the other time (~89%) no integration of light is going on? I understand that the motion of the mirror is adjusted to the distance to the planet/moon (11500 km at EGA) and spacecraft rotation such that there spatial gaps are avoided: pixel width on Earth ~1.7 km (2 km with motional smearing). The duration of lightning flashes measured on the ground varies, a median duration of 0.52 s is given in Kákona et al., 2023, so the 200 ms step duration would be no problem, However, a flash typically consists of much shorter "strokea". This temporal characteristics of lightning flashes is discussed in section 3.5, but the possible effects of the integration in time by MAIJIs with gaps (if I understood correctly) and of relatively slow sampling (200 ms) could perhaps be elaborated on a bit more.
Line 301: "kelvin" --> "Kelvin"
Section 3.3 Oxygen lines
A recent publication with temperature estimates in lightning based on atomic oxygen lines (observed at the ground) is by Wemhoner et al. (2026). I'm not sure how relevant this would be for the discussion in this manuscript, and suggest to the authors to have a look at this paper.
Section 3.5. Temporal resolution
Kákona et al. (2023), already mentioned above, might be a fresh reference with some relevance for this discussion.
References
Kákona, J., Mikeš, J., Ambrožová, I., Ploc, O., Velychko, O., Sihver, L., and Kákona, M.: In situ ground-based mobile measurement of lightning events above central Europe, Atmos. Meas. Tech., 16, 547–561, https://doi.org/10.5194/amt-16-547-2023, 2023.
Wemhoner, J., Leal, A.F.R., da Silva, C.L. et al. Atomic oxygen photometric temperature of lightning and its sub-processes with SOPAPILLA. Sci Rep 16, 4068 (2026). https://doi.org/10.1038/s41598-025-34189-8