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The solar induced 27-day modulation on polar mesospheric cloud (PMC), based on the combined observations from SOFIE and MLS
Abstract. Temperature is considered to be the key driving factor of the polar mesospheric cloud (PMC) variations, and the external source of temperature change is mainly from the solar radiations. In this paper, we use the observations of vertical column of ice water content (IWC) and mesopause temperature collected by the Solar Occultation For Ice Experiment (SOFIE), combined with the temperature data of Microwave Limb Sounder (MLS), to determine the time lags between temperature and IWC anomalies in responding to the solar radiation index Y10, through superposed epoch analysis (SEA) and time lag correlation analysis methods. The results show that the IWC responses to the Y10 later than the mesospheric temperature does. Further investigation of the relationship between mesospheric temperature and PMC reveals that the average time lag day is 0 days in the northern hemisphere (NH), and 1 day in the southern hemisphere (SH). The differences in temperature response to the 27-day solar rotational modulation with atmospheric pressure and latitude are analyzed, based on the temperature observations from 2004 to 2020 by MLS. Twelve PMC seasons with 27-day periodicity are distinguished, with 9 of them have time lags increasing with atmospheric pressure (or decreasing with altitude).
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RC1: 'Comment on angeo-2022-22', Anonymous Referee #1, 27 Sep 2022
Review of “The solar induced 27-day modulation on polar mesospheric cloud (PMC), based on the combined observations from SOFIE and MLS” by Shican et al.
General Comments
This paper investigates how the 27-day solar rotation impacts polar mesospheric clouds (PMC), using observations from the SOFIE and MLS satellite instruments.
The paper reproduces previous investigations by several different authors, who used SOFIE observations to study how the 27-day solar rotation affects PMCs, temperature, and water vapor. The Authors need to better motivate their work, especially since they are repeating previous studies. Specifically, they should indicate what advancements they are after, and/or if there are issues with the previous studies that they hope to resolve.
Implementation of the English language could be greatly improved. I cite a few instances below, but certainly not all of them. This makes the paper difficult to read, and could certainly be used as grounds for rejection. Rather, I ask the Authors to revise the paper, and to possibly seek assistance with the writing before sending it back for review. The scientific community needs to uphold a high standard of writing and grammar, and this paper does not meet such a standard.
Specific Comments
Line 12: It is certainly not true that temperature is considered by all to be the controlling factor. Some studies indicate that water vapor is the major factor determining PMC variability [e.g., Lubken et al., 2021]. You should make a fair statement here.
Lines12-17: This sentence is too long.
Line 30: What do you mean by “an increment of water”?
Line 37: Eliminate “the” before PMC and mesospheric.
Line 40-43: This sentence is too long.
Line 72: SOFIE and AIM were defined above.
Line 82: 1.5 degrees in what context? Is this the FOV width? Longitude?
Line 84: The MLS vertical resolution is roughly a scale height (~8 km) in the upper mesosphere. This makes it somewhat difficult for use in PMC studies, because PMCs have much finer vertical structure.
Line 85: Correlation between what parameters? What seasonal components are referred to? T & H2O I assume?
Line 88: A 35-day window will not remove the seasonal variation in polar summer. The seasonal variation in temperature for example, is more on the order of 100 days (Figure 1). 35 days rather removes natural variability and noise. Please clarify this discussion.
Figure 1b: You do not state where the temperatures come from.
Line 100: Add a reference here.
Line 103: “serial numbers”? Perhaps you mean “sequential”
Line 110-112: The nomenclature T_anomalies is awkward, consider using Ta or DT (same comment for Y10).
Lines 115-120: This discussion is hard to follow, and should be rewritten.
Line 156: Temperature is spelled wrong. Is it true that T drives the 27-day response in PMCs? What about water vapor? SOFIE measures H2O, and you should look at that here as well. Perhaps there is a relationship that others have missed?
Equation 6: It would be more appropriate to write S as the ratio of the H2O partial pressure over the saturation vapor pressure. You should then state that the denominator in Eqn. 6 is the saturation vapor pressure according to Marti and Mauersberger [1993].
Line 161: The accepted unit for pressure is hPa.
Line 163: This does not mean that you can ignore water vapor. There are numerous papers that document a strong dependence of PMCs on water vapor, and you should certainly consider it as important here.
Line 164: Are you looking at T from MLS or SOFIE or both? The pressure levels you select are below typical PMC heights (0.05 hPa or ~84 km). Is there a reason for this?
Line 165 (and elsewhere): I think you mean hPa, not pa, for the unit of pressure.
Lines 171-177: This discussion is poorly written and hard to understand.
Figure 2: “SOFIF” -> “SOFIE”
Line 184: visibility -? variability?
Line 187: “exits” -> exists
Line 192: I think you have confused the MLS and SOFIE results here. Furthermore, the anti-correlation is not significant for the SH using SOFIE T, and barely significant when using MLS T. This may indicate another pathway, perhaps water vapor.
Lines 203-205: What you offer as “an explanation” is simply a restatement of what is observed, and not an explanation of what may be causing it.
Figure 6 & Line 207: These results are puzzling. Panels a, c, and d show what is expected, with a positive correlation near zero time lag. Panel b seems to be completely opposite, with a negative correlation near zero time lag. This certainly warrants discussion, and perhaps some investigation to see if it is an error in the analysis, or something unique about that season.
Figure 7: There are similar discrepancies here as were mentioned concerning Figure 6.
Section 4.2: You show the correlation results vs. latitude in Figures 5-7 for 13 of the 16 PMC seasons examined. The presentation not in any logical order (i.e., by time…), and furthermore switches between NH and SH. I suggest that you rather show the SEA analysis vs. latitude in both hemispheres. Then, you can show one or two individual seasons of interest if they helps illustrate your ideas.
Table 2: Are these results for SOFIE or MLS?
Line 228: Is it also possible that the change with height is a reflection of a dynamical process? For example, vertical winds in the mesosphere are a few cm/s (or roughly 0.2 km/day), which is reminiscent of your change in time lag with height.
Section 5: The conclusions are concise, but are not clearly stated. This sections needs to be rewritten.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/angeo-2022-22-RC1 -
AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Shican Qiu, 09 Nov 2022
We would like to offer our sincere thanks to the reviewer for the valuable comments and constructive suggestions. We went through all of the comments thoroughly and revised the manuscript accordingly. All changes in red fonts have been marked in the revised manuscript. The explicit answers to the comments are given in the supplement file.
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AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Shican Qiu, 09 Nov 2022
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RC2: 'Comment on angeo-2022-22', Anonymous Referee #2, 01 Oct 2022
Review of “The solar induced 27-day modulation on polar mesospheric cloud (PMC), based on the combined observations from SOFIE and MLS” by Qiu et al.
The paper focuses on the investigation of 27-day oscillation of PMC based on satellite observations of IWC and temperature. The author conducted comprehensive data analysis and confirmed the correlation between the PMC variations with the solar activities, represented by the Y10 index. The presentation is reasonably clean the conclusions are solid. The data analysis algorithm follows Thurairajah et al., 2017 with more SOFIE data, coupled with MLS observations. However, the role of MLS data are not clearly addressed in the paper. Shouldn’t the simultaneous IWC and temperature measurements by SOFIE provide enough data already to establish their correlation? Involving a different instrument can cause unwanted bias in the results due to distinct sampling schemes, such as resolution and sensitivity issues, and may not help the investigation. If the author insists to include MLS data, the paper should articulate the motivation and, at least, provide some discussion on the consistency between the two instruments’ measurements. Note that the MLS IWC covers range starting from upper troposphere. Does the troposphere cloud ice affect the overall PMC results in the paper? In addition, the objectives of this study are vaguely stated. The paper also lacks the discussions of the results. What do these new results help to understand the underline mechanism of the 27-day oscillation of PMC. The current version reads like an experimental report, simply repeating the analysis with more data and listing the outputs of the calculations. Overall, what are the new discoveries in this study and their contributions to the PMC dynamics and chemistry?
Minor comments:
- Page 2, line43-45. This sentence reads somewhat strange. Please consider to rephrase.
- Page 2, line 50 “…solar radiation will increase the mesopause temperature by heating”. This statement is questionable. The MLT temperature variations are mostly controlled by the dynamics and chemistry.
- Page 3, line 60-62. This statement need more clarification, I think. Is this a hypothesis based on observations or some model simulations?
- Are the temperature in Figure 1 SOFIE temperature or MLS temperature?
- Page 6, line 162-164. This statement is only true when the temperature is low, I think. The equation is fine here, because the summer mesopause temperature is low. However, it would be good to set a limit.
- The MLS data site in the Data availability does not seem to demonstrate the data resource. At least it is not quite clear.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/angeo-2022-22-RC2 -
AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Shican Qiu, 09 Nov 2022
We would like to offer our sincere thanks to the reviewer for the valuable comments and constructive suggestions. We went through all of the comments thoroughly and revised the manuscript accordingly. All changes in red fonts have been marked in the revised manuscript. The explicit answers to the comments are given in the supplement file.
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AC3: 'Comment on angeo-2022-22', Shican Qiu, 09 Nov 2022
Dear Editor,
We are extremely grateful for the comments from the reviewers and would like to thank the reviewers for their thoughtful comments and efforts towards improving our manuscript. I as well as your open-mindedness in our revised manuscript is notably worth mentioning.
According to the two reviewers, we modified the abstract and conclusion of the article. We have revised many details of the article, such as the description of the data and method in section 2, the data processing in section 3, and the results in section 4. We have addressed all the comments from both reviewers detailedly, and wrote the responses to the reviewers accordingly.
We have learned a lot from the valuable comments and suggestions from the reviewers. We hope that our revised manuscript is a reasonable contribution to the research on solar induced 27-day modulation on polar mesospheric cloud. We would like to take this opportunity to thank you for the effort and expertise that you contributed towards reviewing the article, without which it would be impossible to maintain the high standards of peer-reviewed journals.
We look forward to a more positive news from your decision. Thank you again for the professional handling and opportunity to offer our revised manuscript for Advances in Space Research. We would appreciate if the quality of our article could meet the standards.
Kind regards,
Yours sincerely,
Shican QiuCitation: https://doi.org/10.5194/angeo-2022-22-AC3
Status: closed
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RC1: 'Comment on angeo-2022-22', Anonymous Referee #1, 27 Sep 2022
Review of “The solar induced 27-day modulation on polar mesospheric cloud (PMC), based on the combined observations from SOFIE and MLS” by Shican et al.
General Comments
This paper investigates how the 27-day solar rotation impacts polar mesospheric clouds (PMC), using observations from the SOFIE and MLS satellite instruments.
The paper reproduces previous investigations by several different authors, who used SOFIE observations to study how the 27-day solar rotation affects PMCs, temperature, and water vapor. The Authors need to better motivate their work, especially since they are repeating previous studies. Specifically, they should indicate what advancements they are after, and/or if there are issues with the previous studies that they hope to resolve.
Implementation of the English language could be greatly improved. I cite a few instances below, but certainly not all of them. This makes the paper difficult to read, and could certainly be used as grounds for rejection. Rather, I ask the Authors to revise the paper, and to possibly seek assistance with the writing before sending it back for review. The scientific community needs to uphold a high standard of writing and grammar, and this paper does not meet such a standard.
Specific Comments
Line 12: It is certainly not true that temperature is considered by all to be the controlling factor. Some studies indicate that water vapor is the major factor determining PMC variability [e.g., Lubken et al., 2021]. You should make a fair statement here.
Lines12-17: This sentence is too long.
Line 30: What do you mean by “an increment of water”?
Line 37: Eliminate “the” before PMC and mesospheric.
Line 40-43: This sentence is too long.
Line 72: SOFIE and AIM were defined above.
Line 82: 1.5 degrees in what context? Is this the FOV width? Longitude?
Line 84: The MLS vertical resolution is roughly a scale height (~8 km) in the upper mesosphere. This makes it somewhat difficult for use in PMC studies, because PMCs have much finer vertical structure.
Line 85: Correlation between what parameters? What seasonal components are referred to? T & H2O I assume?
Line 88: A 35-day window will not remove the seasonal variation in polar summer. The seasonal variation in temperature for example, is more on the order of 100 days (Figure 1). 35 days rather removes natural variability and noise. Please clarify this discussion.
Figure 1b: You do not state where the temperatures come from.
Line 100: Add a reference here.
Line 103: “serial numbers”? Perhaps you mean “sequential”
Line 110-112: The nomenclature T_anomalies is awkward, consider using Ta or DT (same comment for Y10).
Lines 115-120: This discussion is hard to follow, and should be rewritten.
Line 156: Temperature is spelled wrong. Is it true that T drives the 27-day response in PMCs? What about water vapor? SOFIE measures H2O, and you should look at that here as well. Perhaps there is a relationship that others have missed?
Equation 6: It would be more appropriate to write S as the ratio of the H2O partial pressure over the saturation vapor pressure. You should then state that the denominator in Eqn. 6 is the saturation vapor pressure according to Marti and Mauersberger [1993].
Line 161: The accepted unit for pressure is hPa.
Line 163: This does not mean that you can ignore water vapor. There are numerous papers that document a strong dependence of PMCs on water vapor, and you should certainly consider it as important here.
Line 164: Are you looking at T from MLS or SOFIE or both? The pressure levels you select are below typical PMC heights (0.05 hPa or ~84 km). Is there a reason for this?
Line 165 (and elsewhere): I think you mean hPa, not pa, for the unit of pressure.
Lines 171-177: This discussion is poorly written and hard to understand.
Figure 2: “SOFIF” -> “SOFIE”
Line 184: visibility -? variability?
Line 187: “exits” -> exists
Line 192: I think you have confused the MLS and SOFIE results here. Furthermore, the anti-correlation is not significant for the SH using SOFIE T, and barely significant when using MLS T. This may indicate another pathway, perhaps water vapor.
Lines 203-205: What you offer as “an explanation” is simply a restatement of what is observed, and not an explanation of what may be causing it.
Figure 6 & Line 207: These results are puzzling. Panels a, c, and d show what is expected, with a positive correlation near zero time lag. Panel b seems to be completely opposite, with a negative correlation near zero time lag. This certainly warrants discussion, and perhaps some investigation to see if it is an error in the analysis, or something unique about that season.
Figure 7: There are similar discrepancies here as were mentioned concerning Figure 6.
Section 4.2: You show the correlation results vs. latitude in Figures 5-7 for 13 of the 16 PMC seasons examined. The presentation not in any logical order (i.e., by time…), and furthermore switches between NH and SH. I suggest that you rather show the SEA analysis vs. latitude in both hemispheres. Then, you can show one or two individual seasons of interest if they helps illustrate your ideas.
Table 2: Are these results for SOFIE or MLS?
Line 228: Is it also possible that the change with height is a reflection of a dynamical process? For example, vertical winds in the mesosphere are a few cm/s (or roughly 0.2 km/day), which is reminiscent of your change in time lag with height.
Section 5: The conclusions are concise, but are not clearly stated. This sections needs to be rewritten.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/angeo-2022-22-RC1 -
AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Shican Qiu, 09 Nov 2022
We would like to offer our sincere thanks to the reviewer for the valuable comments and constructive suggestions. We went through all of the comments thoroughly and revised the manuscript accordingly. All changes in red fonts have been marked in the revised manuscript. The explicit answers to the comments are given in the supplement file.
-
AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Shican Qiu, 09 Nov 2022
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RC2: 'Comment on angeo-2022-22', Anonymous Referee #2, 01 Oct 2022
Review of “The solar induced 27-day modulation on polar mesospheric cloud (PMC), based on the combined observations from SOFIE and MLS” by Qiu et al.
The paper focuses on the investigation of 27-day oscillation of PMC based on satellite observations of IWC and temperature. The author conducted comprehensive data analysis and confirmed the correlation between the PMC variations with the solar activities, represented by the Y10 index. The presentation is reasonably clean the conclusions are solid. The data analysis algorithm follows Thurairajah et al., 2017 with more SOFIE data, coupled with MLS observations. However, the role of MLS data are not clearly addressed in the paper. Shouldn’t the simultaneous IWC and temperature measurements by SOFIE provide enough data already to establish their correlation? Involving a different instrument can cause unwanted bias in the results due to distinct sampling schemes, such as resolution and sensitivity issues, and may not help the investigation. If the author insists to include MLS data, the paper should articulate the motivation and, at least, provide some discussion on the consistency between the two instruments’ measurements. Note that the MLS IWC covers range starting from upper troposphere. Does the troposphere cloud ice affect the overall PMC results in the paper? In addition, the objectives of this study are vaguely stated. The paper also lacks the discussions of the results. What do these new results help to understand the underline mechanism of the 27-day oscillation of PMC. The current version reads like an experimental report, simply repeating the analysis with more data and listing the outputs of the calculations. Overall, what are the new discoveries in this study and their contributions to the PMC dynamics and chemistry?
Minor comments:
- Page 2, line43-45. This sentence reads somewhat strange. Please consider to rephrase.
- Page 2, line 50 “…solar radiation will increase the mesopause temperature by heating”. This statement is questionable. The MLT temperature variations are mostly controlled by the dynamics and chemistry.
- Page 3, line 60-62. This statement need more clarification, I think. Is this a hypothesis based on observations or some model simulations?
- Are the temperature in Figure 1 SOFIE temperature or MLS temperature?
- Page 6, line 162-164. This statement is only true when the temperature is low, I think. The equation is fine here, because the summer mesopause temperature is low. However, it would be good to set a limit.
- The MLS data site in the Data availability does not seem to demonstrate the data resource. At least it is not quite clear.
Citation: https://doi.org/10.5194/angeo-2022-22-RC2 -
AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Shican Qiu, 09 Nov 2022
We would like to offer our sincere thanks to the reviewer for the valuable comments and constructive suggestions. We went through all of the comments thoroughly and revised the manuscript accordingly. All changes in red fonts have been marked in the revised manuscript. The explicit answers to the comments are given in the supplement file.
-
AC3: 'Comment on angeo-2022-22', Shican Qiu, 09 Nov 2022
Dear Editor,
We are extremely grateful for the comments from the reviewers and would like to thank the reviewers for their thoughtful comments and efforts towards improving our manuscript. I as well as your open-mindedness in our revised manuscript is notably worth mentioning.
According to the two reviewers, we modified the abstract and conclusion of the article. We have revised many details of the article, such as the description of the data and method in section 2, the data processing in section 3, and the results in section 4. We have addressed all the comments from both reviewers detailedly, and wrote the responses to the reviewers accordingly.
We have learned a lot from the valuable comments and suggestions from the reviewers. We hope that our revised manuscript is a reasonable contribution to the research on solar induced 27-day modulation on polar mesospheric cloud. We would like to take this opportunity to thank you for the effort and expertise that you contributed towards reviewing the article, without which it would be impossible to maintain the high standards of peer-reviewed journals.
We look forward to a more positive news from your decision. Thank you again for the professional handling and opportunity to offer our revised manuscript for Advances in Space Research. We would appreciate if the quality of our article could meet the standards.
Kind regards,
Yours sincerely,
Shican QiuCitation: https://doi.org/10.5194/angeo-2022-22-AC3
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